Returning Girlfriend

Returning Girlfriend

Banpum Yeochin | 반품 여친

Publication: 2019-2020, Completed
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His girlfriend disappeared after leaving a sex video. But his girlfriend was returned in front of his house. What has happened to her in the meantime, living with his girlfriend who returned with a screw missing in her head?

Drama Hentai Romance
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Start Date:
23/12/2019
End Date:
17/05/2020
Updated:
30/09/2024 18:48

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alteraphim
alteraphim
1 year ago

Very quick, could have used some additional panels for development. Not enough emotional payoff either. Great art, but the writing needs some work. The potential is there, I think they will get better with practice.

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statyc
statyc
10 months ago
Reply to  alteraphim

I agree. Several good plot points are created and then never followed. Questions are raised and never answered in the story, then walked right on by. The art and dialog are good, but it lacks depth. And there’s never an emotional redemption on screen between MC and FMC. It seems this is the only work by the artist and author, too, which is unfortunate.

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